The capricious charisma,in my
Mind of thy cloying smile
Is penetrating into my being.
Am I a hedonist? An
Idiosyncratic of your tastes
Trying to attain nirvana in
The summer of your abdomen.
For how long will you, assure
The false panacea to soothe my
Soul,but not my body.
Are you afraid of the stigma
In your suave obligations,about
My presence when we burn together
In my callipygian adventures.
Embrocation of your snake
Petted,training in your mouth
On mine,is becoming fugacious.
Lassitude didn’t kiss you,when
I begged for a volume, but still
That snake of yours gripped mine
Now the lower one,to make me inure.
I know why you hesitate to sign
On the palimpsest of my propinquity,
I hope you get poisoned. By that other snake!!!
(C)Sapling of Dawn
I am always in awe for your imagery.
So well done.
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Thank you.It means a lot coming from you.Thanks again for the motivation.
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Always!
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🤩🤩😁😁
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Hahaha, you’re a maestro! The summer of your abdomen made me laugh out loud! And palimpsest of propinquity–love it–there are layers upon layers of imagery in this verse and maybe it’s just me but I feel it’s your best piece among all I’ve read so far. Keep up the good work!
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I feel that way too
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Reblogged your post–did you like mine?
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Yup! You used my name once
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Dear friend, that’s a word for me first then your name–thanks for motivating me and carefully reading 🙂
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😇😇
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Reblogged this on absolutely bunkum! and commented:
Loved reading this masterpiece from young poet! I hope you would also appreciate his work!
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Well done with this painting of imagery in words Soumyashree
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Oh thanks Dunu.You are on it I see.I am expecting a new one from you soon.
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WOW!! This piece literally took my breath away. What a sensual image that you created with your intricately woven words! Amazing work, Sifan.
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Thank you Rulla.I feel thrilled that you like it
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You’re most welcome!
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A brilliant piece✨
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Thanks Eli.Your appreciation is gracious
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A wealth of imagery here… ‘Trying to attain nirvana in
The summer of your abdomen’… loving that line
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Awww Thank you Kim.It means a lot coming from you.
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Welcome 🙂
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I’ve just become speechless…can’t explain how amazing this poem is….loved this piece of writing👏👏👏
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Thanks Tapasi for paying a read
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
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I loved the images that you conjured up!
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Thanks sir.keep visiting
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I read this while listening to Amanaemonesia.
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Never heard of Amanaemonesia but thanks for paying a read
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By Chairlift. Good song. Great group.
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Ok I will see that
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HEy I heard it and it was amazing
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Not bad hey.
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The imagery you conjure up is surreal ❤
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Thanks Sulaiman.It means a lot coming from you.
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Woah. Sizzling!
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Woah!!Thanks.keep visiting
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love this !!! “trying to attain nirvana in the summer of your abdomen” Love it. and at the end, I can feel the tormented frustration and anger. ❤
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Yup!!The end was a bit tumultuous
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“In my callipygian adventures.” Wow! Such a nice poem. I like your euphemistic expressions.
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Thank for paying a read.
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“Idiosyncratic of your tastes/ Trying to attain nirvana in /The summer of your abdomen.” love these lines!
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Thanks MC.Keep visiting
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I wouldn’t mind reading this again and again. How I wish WP had highlight just like Medium.
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Thanks for paying a read
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I came here to read this again. I really did that. You believe that?
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Why not? My fellow blogger
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Seems like you and I, have a lot in common when it comes to combining words with imagery.
You’ve done such a brilliant job interweaving all poetic words and embracing the healing in our current state.
Speaking of words. I posted a new poem and I think you’ll trip out on it. 🙂
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Thanks you Charlie.I will hit on.
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You welcome my friend. Your work is very influential and I’m glad I’m following your work and be inspired by your writing. Bless you my friend. 🙂
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This was really beautiful!
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Thanks Rishhu
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Welcome!
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Congratulations 👌.I nominated you for the award post. Check my recent post
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