Carnal Release

The capricious charisma,in my
Mind of thy cloying smile
Is penetrating into my being.

Am I a hedonist? An
Idiosyncratic of your tastes
Trying to attain nirvana in
The summer of your abdomen.

For how long will you, assure
The false panacea to soothe my
Soul,but not my body.

Are you afraid of the stigma
In your suave obligations,about
My presence when we burn together
In my callipygian adventures.

Embrocation of your snake
Petted,training in you mouth
On mine,is becoming fugacious.

Lassitude didn’t kiss you,when
I begged for a volume, but still
That snake of yours gripped mine
Now the lower one,to make me inure.

I know why you hesitate to sign
On the palimpsest of my propinquity,
I hope you get poisoned. By that other snake!!!

(C)Sapling of Dawn

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53 thoughts on “Carnal Release

  1. Hahaha, you’re a maestro! The summer of your abdomen made me laugh out loud! And palimpsest of propinquity–love it–there are layers upon layers of imagery in this verse and maybe it’s just me but I feel it’s your best piece among all I’ve read so far. Keep up the good work!

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      1. Dear friend, that’s a word for me first then your name–thanks for motivating me and carefully reading 🙂

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  2. Seems like you and I, have a lot in common when it comes to combining words with imagery.

    You’ve done such a brilliant job interweaving all poetic words and embracing the healing in our current state.

    Speaking of words. I posted a new poem and I think you’ll trip out on it. 🙂

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